Sorrow

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  • minigirl695
  • is having dilemma that no one can even think of.

Poem Commentary

I wrote this after a fight I had with my mom a while back. And this is how I feel everytime we fight =(

Sorrow

Sorrow, pain, frustration, tears...

All come together as the words hit you.

When you do try, tell them what they want to hear.

They tell you to restart and build it back.

You try and try, yet they don’t give you that chance,

That they say you were given.

 

I cry these tears that has pain of betrayal,

What they call crocodile tears.

These tears that are tainted with the pain of betrayal,

What they push aside as false.

I try and try, yet I am never given,

The chance that was promised.

 

Let me try, let me cry.

All these tears I held behind.

I tried to crawl, you let me fall,

Into a room of empty sorrow.

A room so narrow.

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hoth2o commented on Sorrow

09-07-2009

" into a room of empty sorrow", indeed, I know that place too well.

minigirl695

09/16/2009

Thank you for your comment =) it's well apprecated. But yes, that placwe I have often floated to in devastating moments.

minigirl695

09/16/2009

*place*

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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