Invincible

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  • minigirl695
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Invincible

Paint a masterpiece,

And use crayons with your children.

Dance a night away,

And sleep the day in.

Sing for the world,

And silence for yourself.

Act with the most beautiful mask on,

And be yourself to everyone who cares.

 

 

To be an artist,

You must consider everything art.

To be a dancer,

You must dance every step there is.

To be a musician,

You must sing or play every note possible.

To be an actor,

Lie to the world with a mask, and be honest with your own smiling face.

 

 

That is when you have truly become invincible.

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keithrberryjr commented on Invincible

08-06-2009

This is a great poem.I really enjoyed reading it.

Vincent commented on Invincible

08-06-2009

what a great poem, and believe in yourself and all things are possible smiles Vincent

alexan commented on Invincible

08-06-2009

WOW THIS IS DEEP AND YOUR PRETTY!!!!!!! I'M NOT GAY!!!!

jlawrence commented on Invincible

08-06-2009

I love your poem, the underlying theme is go all out for your passion whatever it may be....my only criticism is the "you must sing/play every note possible" I would choose sing or play....the slash mark interrupted my mental flow of the line...could just be me, great job!

minigirl695

08/06/2009

Thank you, I just might do that. =)

keithrberryjr

08/06/2009

I like the idea of using or in that place.It continues the flow a lot better

hdmac commented on Invincible

08-06-2009

Very difficult to read the green letters against a beige background.

minigirl695

08/06/2009

Oh I'm srry, I just copied and paste it for my website. I'll edit it =)

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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