Deceiver

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    • minigirl695
    • is having dilemma that no one can even think of.

    Deceiver

    A pain, a pleasure.

    So deep, so bold.

    From a lust so hot,

    Or a heart so cold.

     

    Can heal, can bleed,

    So fast, so thick.

    Flowing out the veins,

    Cleaned with a lick.

     

    You think, you act,

    So quick, so smart.

    But through your head,

    Flew a dart.

     

    Believe me here,

    Believe me now.

    I will deceive you.

    Don't ask how.

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    hoth2o commented on Deceiver

    08-06-2009

    You certainly have a way with words my friend. look forward to reading more of your work.
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    minigirl695

    08/06/2009

    =) I appreciate the comments hoth2o. I will do the honor of reading your poems good sir =) ~{@ Lia Cake @}~

    keithrberryjr commented on Deceiver

    08-06-2009

    You have a great way with words.Even phrases as simple as these can turn into a great poem by your hand.
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    alexan commented on Deceiver

    08-06-2009

    i don't know what tosay anymore, its like when i read your poems, i fall in hard, i can't take my eyes off of them
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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