I Know

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    • minigirl695
    • is having dilemma that no one can even think of.

    I Know

    I know who you are,

    I know what you did.

    Good things, bad things,

    Stuff you wanna get rid.

    I’ve been there, I have.

    So don’t worry, I won’t tell.

    I have my own story,

    One I plan to take to Hell.

    Lying, cheating, murder,

    I know them all.

    Especially the ones of broken promises,

    Several, if I recall.

    Do you know?

    Oh, of course you do.

    I know who you are,

    Yes, I know you.

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    keithrberryjr commented on I Know

    08-06-2009

    I like the poem but I feel as if the rhyme might have hurt you more than helped you in places.I would try revising this one using free verse and no rhyme scheme.I think it will really help this poem out
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    keithrberryjr

    08/06/2009

    the first 4 lines are really the only ones that seem difficult to read.The rest is actually really good.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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