No Name, Only Feelings

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  • minigirl695
  • is having dilemma that no one can even think of.

No Name, Only Feelings

My heart would pound,

But there is no sound.

Sorrow filled eyes,

As I say my good-byes.

 

A mind filled of insanity,

No room for vanity.

But I always stare into the mirror

Looking for my interior.

 

What is it that he doesn't see?

Does he realize I'll always be me?

Just focus in deep and well,

It’s still me, can't he tell?

 

What's wrong with this scene?

It's meant to be serene.

He promised forever and always,

But time flies with lonely days.

 

No sound, but good-byes.

All insanity on the interior.

Can't see, can't tell.

This scene, of lonely days.

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Helios commented on No Name, Only Feelings

08-06-2009

Praises on this poem [ I will continue to read more of your pieces]. You write with a simply message anyone can understand, yet it reflexes one of the hardest topic of man to answer. I have just discover this website and its great poets in order to learn more [ I hope you can give me some advises].

minigirl695

08/06/2009

Oh thank you very much for your comment. I'm new too, I just signed on today =) But yes, there are quite a few good poets here. And I'd love to give you some advices. =)Just leave me a message =)

keithrberryjr commented on No Name, Only Feelings

08-06-2009

Great Poem.Very deep and emotional.Keep up the good work

alexan commented on No Name, Only Feelings

08-06-2009

wow your deep. you should make a book, seriously..... me stll likie poems :D

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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