So Cold

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So Cold

 

Its so cold in a home without fuel;

When you hope that sun shines in.

Its so cold in a heart without love;

When you feel emptiness within.

Its so cold in a soul without faith;

When you doubt that things will change.

Its so cold in a mind without insight;

When you fear all that seems strange

Its so cold in a world full of pain;

When you cry and you don’t know why.

Its so cold in a life full of shame;

When you lose the will to survive.

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icu2 commented on So Cold

03-16-2010

This sounds like depression. Well put. All is dark to the heavy heart......................TEN

kage commented on So Cold

01-19-2010

This is a great little poem it is well written and put together well it carries a story and touches base with many people i am sure

lonewolf commented on So Cold

01-16-2010

i can relate to this at times. but i also know that life must go on and tomorrow will come.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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