Sherri's Petal

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    Sherri's Petal

    Gentle whispers of wind flow through the air
    A smell is dancing on my nose, beautiful is this
    Scent, beautiful is this day. Thinking of my new
    Blossom.Carefuly I step back in admiration of its
    Delicate form, careful am I to watch her reveal
    Her endless treasure stored so deeply only to
    Appear open and in plain site…Softly keys play a
    Rapture, a melody is forming opening up like the petals
    Of this beautiful flower, steeped in ambient colors
    Dancing in circles in the wind are the loose fibers
    Of love, hope, caring, modest and thoughtful words
    To the same…Shaped are words so skillfully crafted
    And yet whispered in stillness unable to truly articulate
    The inner divine façade…Truly I glow for that that was once
    A stranger, Is now a heroin of words…

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    stellar commented on Sherri's Petal

    09-27-2009

    love this poem so much....the imagery is superb..specifally love this line: Dancing in circles in the wind are the loose fibers Of love, hope, caring, modest and thoughtful words To the same

    chicane407

    10/05/2009

    Thank you foryour kind words they mean alot..

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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