September 12, 2010, 10:30 PM

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    • ManOnTheMoon
    • Past the ocean, and into the clouds, we sail into the sun...

    September 12, 2010, 10:30 PM

    One day,
    We will all stop and think.
    Just take a breath,
    And re-collect ourselves.
    Regain composure,
    And realize,
    Out of all the things we have done,
    It is up to the things we did not do,
    That have led us here,
    To this point in time.
    When it all stacks up,
    Its a wonder how we all survived as long as we did.

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on September 12, 2010, 10:30 PM

    11-25-2010

    oh how well said and so true for so many of us.....bravo....you have some powerful words dear.......loved it.......love asha

    ManOnTheMoon

    07/26/2011

    Thank you for taking the time to read and the compliment, I shall be sure to return the favor when time is granted

    AbysmalGoddess commented on September 12, 2010, 10:30 PM

    11-20-2010

    What a beautiful mind. I have met a new side of you, and I must say, I'm enchanted. You said it all, that revelation that so few of us come to, and how lucky you are to have had this revelation and to be able to put it into words. This is going in my favorites, 10 from me.

    ManOnTheMoon

    07/26/2011

    I thank you for the like, and I have more sides than meet the eye, I am sure there are more you might enjoy, it just takes a time or so to make sure you dont click on one more than once, ha ha. Thank you again for the compliment.

    brokenhearted11 commented on September 12, 2010, 10:30 PM

    10-27-2010

    honestly. how are you such a great writer?! im gonna like... steal someof your skills, okay? i love this, it really makes me think. a wonnnnderful write, couldnt have said it better myself. keep writing!:)

    ManOnTheMoon

    07/26/2011

    I grew up reading a lot, and with a father that used to write/minored in writing, so I guess some of his skills just rubbed off on me, ha ha. But I dont think of myself as great, just, a writer, I write what I feel should be, even if others oppose, so it makes for some... Interesting... Comments, to say the least. Thank you for your compliment though, and taking the time to read

    victoriandoll commented on September 12, 2010, 10:30 PM

    10-19-2010

    hmm...tis make you think....if what we do in everyday is rlly worth it..

    ManOnTheMoon

    07/26/2011

    That can only be answered by the one in which is thinking it, and only then will that person truly know if it is or not. But, its not so much as every day, but, taking it one day at a time. Thank you for the read and compliment, I shall return the favor when time is granted.

    PoetWithCancer commented on September 12, 2010, 10:30 PM

    10-19-2010

    I don't know how you know this at your age, but I know how I know at mine. Good truth here, a grain of sand to sting the eye. 10.

    ManOnTheMoon

    07/26/2011

    I have thought a lot more into life in which I think I have bypassed many, but still in need of learning more, and shall never stop learning, ha ha. I thank you for your read and compliment

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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