‎October ‎25, ‎2010, 2:26 AM

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    Tis but a random thought that popped into my mind while listening to music, and wrote my ideas as they streamed. -Not half bad for no sleep for 2 or 3 days-

    ‎October ‎25, ‎2010, 2:26 AM

    And so I sit,
    Pondering,
    What actions led to this,
    What I did not do,
    What I could have done,
    But in the end,
    It never fails,
    It always is what it is.
    It matters not,
    What you could have done,
    To prevent this matter,
    Or what rout you could have taken,
    But what you did,
    And where it led you,
    There is no Re-do.
    But this is not you,
    Or anything you have done,
    But myself,
    And what I did not do.
    I am the one to blame,
    The one to be judged,
    Hanged.
    I sit here,
    Pondering,
    Waiting,
    Refusing to believe,
    Coming to terms,
    And accepting them,
    And the fact,
    That you are no longer mine.

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    themommyof2 commented on ‎October ‎25, ‎2010, 2:26 AM

    11-02-2010

    Self evaluation is the most difficult kind, but the most rewarding in the end!!! Take it from someone coming upon 1/2 century old. LOL I loved this one.

    10times10 commented on ‎October ‎25, ‎2010, 2:26 AM

    10-29-2010

    we all look back in our lives wishing for a redo, and we all look back asking where it all went wrong...10, from me

    bforibus commented on ‎October ‎25, ‎2010, 2:26 AM

    10-26-2010

    the self reflecting character is always a good character to read. great job on putting the melanclohy emotions to words.

    knight4696 commented on ‎October ‎25, ‎2010, 2:26 AM

    10-25-2010

    Man - this is an awesome write. I can so relate to this right now. I too suffer from Insomnia at times and find that I do some of my best writing during it. I can also relate with the subject matter, because I too am presently having these same feelings. Again Awesome write! :) Ken

    Rhymer commented on ‎October ‎25, ‎2010, 2:26 AM

    10-25-2010

    Ode to a lost love, sicere in the write. An excellent piece. 10 from me.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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