Rain

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    Rain

    The clouds swirl above, colliding in the sky
    Blues become grey, as the sky wants to cry.
    The air has a smell only a storm can bring
    Musical notes only Mother Nature can sing.
    The breath of life, blowing about
    Sometimes a whisper, sometimes a shout.
    The sounds of summer, the sounds of a storm
    The sounds of Life in their natural form.
    The performance has begun, as the sky opens wide
    Down comes the rain, with nothing to hide.
    It covers the earth in an invisible sheen
    A reflection of life, often unseen.
    An artistic portrayal with colors abound
    The world upside down, the sky on the ground.
    The droplets are alive, as they dance on the glass
    Becoming family and friends in the trees and the grass.
    Separate or one, its all in the same
    The uniqueness collected in the droplet of rain.
    A blanket which covers, unbiased around
    A natural demand, uniformally surround.
    The curtains are drawn, the show comes to an end
    The necessity of life from which we depend.
    The stillness that follows, a reminder to reflect
    Nothing for granted, a force to respect.

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    trocka7 commented on Rain

    07-02-2009

    This is fabulous! I really loved it, especially the lines, "The world upside down, the sky on the ground/The droplets are alive, as they dance on the glass/Becoming family and friends in the trees and the grass" I loved every last picture you painted with these words, a great write! I also wrote about a storm, its called "Edge of Storm" if you want to check it out....

    kenparme commented on Rain

    01-01-2009

    Great poem-I liked everything about it.

    bandit1192 commented on Rain

    12-27-2008

    I enjoyed this poem. Very descriptive. Could actually picture looking out a window and watching the storm unfold. Great job

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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