"I Love You"

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    "I Love You"

    I have never said the words that almost pass my lips,
    So far I've caught myself before it almost slips.
    It would feel so natural,and comfortable to say,
    I fear if it is said to soon, you might up and run away.
    I think you know what words those are,that I hold back in my heart,
    I have felt you almost say them too,I've sensed you almost start.
    If I knew I wouldn't lose you,I would say them when they come,
    I don't want to take the chance,I know we've just begun.
    Just know that I am yours,and when the time is here,
    The words I keep behind my lips,I'll say with no more fear.

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    butterfly62463 commented on "I Love You"

    09-12-2009

    your poems has touch my heart even tears has falling,it a honor to read your thoughts and from the heart,keep up the excellent work,I will like to read more.

    IAMLIKEU commented on "I Love You"

    05-19-2009

    New love is the best love You capture it in your words nicely and it flows like a bubbling brook

    Dancingfire

    05/27/2009

    Thank you so much for your warm comment . It means alot.

    Hoosierpoet commented on "I Love You"

    05-11-2009

    Well done, and no doubt left as to what those words really are; words we all long to hear, and long to say, and be accepted and appreciated by the one we say them to. Moses

    LuvUrBabyGirl commented on "I Love You"

    05-09-2009

    I have lived in this place... this exact place.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Dancingfire’s Poems (14)

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    Rivers Of Time 3
    " The Infinite Life Fire" 1
    "Tracings Of Infinity" 0
    "In Silence" 6
    "I Love You" 4
    The Mirrors 2
    "Night Out" 2
    Slowly 1
    Early Morning Walk 5
    Answering The Call 3
    Premature Birth 3
    "A Friend" 1
    Grandfather Comes 3
    December Snow 4