Private Escape

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    Private Escape

    Consumed deep within your tears of desire I am made whole. My day begins lost in your arms, I never tire. Melting together entwines our souls. Flesh heats and rocks us in melody, flys us around the morning sun. Our private escape from reality, just as the day begins. Consumed deep within your tears of desire, I long for each morning. Bliss captured fire, as woman and man join as one.

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    HarverTomsson commented on Private Escape

    12-04-2009

    Good poem with at least one great line.... "flys us around the morning sun" I'll not envy your success, but celebrate it. Kudos to you.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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