Please Just Take It

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    Please Just Take It

    I tremble to think of me in your arms,
    Your world is so safe, I fear no harm.
    I see the love in those radiant eyes,
    More intense on my soul than the brightest skies.

    Your skin under my fingertips excites me,
    I run my hands down your back lightly.
    My thoughts go to pieces when I get around you,
    And I can't express how my heart belongs to you.

    "To good to be true" could express my feelings
    Yet I understand your realistic being.
    My heart chills with fear, scared to be missed,
    By your love's aim, decieved by the touch of a kiss.

    My body is warm and ready when you touch it,
    Willing to please you, or comfort when wanted.
    It's hard to express just what I'm thinking,
    I don't want to be left with a heart that's sinking.

    I really do love you, now and forever,
    And explaining the extent is a difficult endeavor.
    To make you understand that our love will make it,
    I'm offering my undying love, so please, just take it.

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    nakedtruth43 commented on Please Just Take It

    03-16-2009

    You have such an intensity with your writing...like love...it really comes through. Just amazing.

    graceladymn commented on Please Just Take It

    03-15-2009

    Taken, love, its taken. The world is a better place because of you, keep writing, your soaring higher than moonbeams.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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