Peeling back the years

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  • EinStud
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She grows older and often feels as if something, maybe beauty, has been lost. But I only argue that her beauty is not lost at all. It is just the beauty of her mind that starts to reveal herself. And if she lived a life of beauty from the inside, then I guess she will love life the same as she grows older. It will be revealed.

Peeling back the years



Peeling back the years

 

as we grow older

the beauty of the mind starts

to reveal itself

 

EinStud

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stefy commented on Peeling back the years

06-23-2010

.................a nice poem and wise too.....................................

EinStud

07/04/2010

Thanks stefy. I'll be right over to your page and check things out.

angel33614 commented on Peeling back the years

06-21-2010

Like most of your poems, short sweet and to the point but never lacking a meaning behind the words. The beauty of the mind starts to reveal itself, as we grow and age so we grow with wisdom as we learn from our years of trial and tribulations. While the body ages and starts to break down it is our mind that is usually the last to go, for the mind is the vessel to the heart of one's soul and the true beauty and light within... Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Your friend Angel

EinStud

07/04/2010

I should have made the last line, last word, "herself". I have this consistent problem to "run" to the computer and tell the world of my fabulous new findings! Then a week later, I read my words and I fail to see the genius (I see what everyone else sees). I think I have a way to improve this situation. The meaning of the poem is highly tied to the moment. So what I need to do is to recreate the moment that is tied to the meaning of the poem (which means I have to write double haiku's, or make up my own form?) It is a thought (as I sit here in front of my computer, listening to espn two rooms away, two dogs by my side, and the sound of my mantel clock ticking... The world is quiet... It's 4am, It's Sunday... and I love it)

FranzJ commented on Peeling back the years

06-20-2010

like fine wine - getting better as we get older- - - - - - - - - - - - -

bluskyinthenite commented on Peeling back the years

06-20-2010

Very true I believe i grow with much appreciation of what i have more so... Than when i was a young one. thank you

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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