Open Book

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    Open Book
    He saw what she gave to see
    Her smile complimented by many
    Posture most carefully correct
    Clothes chosen for the demure with the hint of steam
    In the meet of firsts do we not represent
    Her perfume chosen for its subtle sting
    Senses brought to the alert
    He looks in her eyes and the truth is seen
    She brings with her integrity and loyalty
    Words of true spill from her lips
    When you take the time to savor you will taste the richness of life.
    Iamadreamr
    3/28/09 K.D.G.

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    dahlusion commented on Open Book

    03-31-2009

    The truth here is like warm, spring rain pouring over me. Lovely!
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    Drivingczar commented on Open Book

    03-28-2009

    Ah, the elusive desired beauty inside a lady's heart!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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