Afterwards

3 Comments

Tags:
  • Love

    Poem Commentary

    sOMETIMES i THINK THAT ITS ALL ABOUT MOMENTS IN TIME THAT WE EXPERIENCE AND HOW WE WISH TO INTERPRET THEM SO YOU SEE OUR VISION SHARED.

    Afterwards

     Looking up she see's his eyes upon her
    Smiling into them in return is the secrets of moments before
    Delight in his presance and company evident in the softness of her eyes and face
    Daily routine oft times done without thought
    Now the moment shared bringing about shyness
    Complete is the joy that she feel within
    That he is there right now still bringing thoughts of Wow
    So long awaited this time complete is the feeling within
    He is here he is mine
    She will savor she will taste
    She will live and enjoy all he will give
    And in the all she will taste the love of a lifetime
    Looking up she meets his eyes
    Iamadreamr
    copywrite 8/15/09 K.D.G.

    Poem Comments

    (3)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    dahlusion commented on Afterwards

    08-23-2009

    This is like a soothing dip in a pool of warm mineral water in the open air of the Travatien desert hot springs: sensual and dreamy.
    Reply to Comment

    Iamadreamr

    08/23/2009

    yes you see my vision complete!!

    nettieforce1 commented on Afterwards

    08-19-2009

    very nice. i really like the rhythm of your poem.love the phrase: "daily routine oft times done without thought now the moment shared bringing about shyness" that is very truly seen and deftly expressed. this poem just needs a rewrite to tighten it up a bit, but definitely a hit!
    Reply to Comment

    Iamadreamr

    08/19/2009

    I thank you for your input it is always appreciated and I agree I should have put a bit more into it.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    Iamadreamr’s Poems (43)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Passing Time 0 03/07/2012
    Lost 0 03/04/2012
    Bluer then Blue 0 03/26/2011
    Together Alone 3 09/23/2010
    Words 2 09/22/2010
    I Tease him no more 2 04/24/2010
    Unrequited Love 1 02/14/2010
    Enlightend 2 11/14/2009
    Moving Forward 2 08/25/2009
    Afterwards 3 08/16/2009
    Forever Mine 3 08/04/2009
    Romantic Moment 1 07/22/2009
    Times Shadows 2 06/02/2009
    Passion Real 3 05/18/2009
    A Country Road 3 05/18/2009
    What is 3 04/15/2009
    Addictions 3 04/03/2009
    Open Book 3 03/28/2009
    Visions of Days End 2 03/26/2009
    Walking Alone 2 03/26/2009
    To Live 2 03/04/2009
    Constant Transform 2 03/02/2009
    Fear of Regrets 1 03/02/2009
    Hurt Deep 1 03/01/2009
    WONDER 2 02/26/2009
    Fathoms of Yearn 1 02/23/2009
    Tenderhearted 1 01/16/2009
    Long Ago 1 01/16/2009
    Thoughts 0 01/16/2009
    Cry Cry Loud 0 01/16/2009
    Days of Acceptance 0 01/16/2009
    Lifes Changes 1 11/15/2008
    Friendship 0 11/15/2008
    The Next Step 1 11/14/2008
    Julian 0 11/14/2008
    A Pleasant Interlude 1 11/13/2008
    We Shall See 1 11/13/2008
    Dream of Me 1 11/13/2008
    Sleepin the Deep 0 11/11/2008
    Time 1 11/11/2008
    Words Shared 0 11/11/2008
    Weigh Carefull 1 11/11/2008
    Matiana 1 11/11/2008
    Top of Page