Nothing but you

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  • hannahxP
  • the greatest litterary work of my life, will be the last i ever wright.

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not really sure where this one came from

Nothing but you

You're the bullet to my heart
You're the razor to my wrist
You can beg all you want
But nothing can disengage this tryst
Too late, damage done
You only wanted to get colse to my heart
But you're dangerous
You ripped me apart

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Sx9 commented on Nothing but you

02-26-2011

and so life continue,and you must be glad,,but withough remose,for this was just a game where people get hurt from just wanted to get close,,so what next,,

aysha commented on Nothing but you

02-26-2011

Thats very sad.. Brighter days are near my dear. No need to shed those tears. When love is lost, it soon will come again. As one rose wilts, another will grow in its place. Dry those tears.. Love is always near

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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