i love...

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    • hannahxP
    • the greatest litterary work of my life, will be the last i ever wright.

    Poem Commentary

    its kinda late and i should be studying for my french final but i decided to do something positive like wright about lovley things insted of negative stuff like studying a lanuage that i dont even speak! (which is odd because it was after all a year long class and the only french i know is from a british tv show)

    i love...

     i love to wake up...
            then roll over and go to sleep agian.
    i love showers in the mornings...
            to warm up my cold skin.
    i love my coffie...
            drinking from the mug i made.
    i love my memories...
            although some may fade.
    i love my crazy friends...
            the crazy stuff we do.
    i love my messy room...
            hey wheres my other shoe?!
    i love colorado...
            mountain sunset everyday.
    i love the rain...
            faithfully comming every may.
    i love the rivers...
            the lovley sounds that the make.
    i love the grass...
            in Pueblo theres not much to take.
    i love music...
            beauty in the sounds.
    i love my puppy...
            and all the pups in pounds.
    i love my guitar...
            Athena is her name.
    i love drawing...
            someday its gonna be my fame
    but most of all 
    never least
    always last 
    i 
    love
    you
    <3
    [Bcuz ur a blast]               

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    freemansvoice commented on i love...

    07-23-2012

    love is a great thing to look forward. I've had it and lost it , but the memories of love is forever. Never named my guitar. thanks for the poem
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    twayneking commented on i love...

    05-26-2011

    With that attitude, you'll probably survive nicely in this nasty old world. Your poem made me smile. Thanks.
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    hannahxP

    08/16/2011

    a;ways happy to share a smile thanks=]

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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