Nicolas Donato

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about a kid i went to school with named nick donato. the classic story of the outcast incessantly picked on by his classmates. nick ended up hanging himself from his childhood tree house during our sophomore year in high school, he was found with his discman still playing slayer the next morning

Nicolas Donato

His heart sinks as he rethinks
and remembers the words once spoken
Sitting alone in his lonesome abode
all stone cold and broken
Like cracked glass and his shattered past
smashed by his own misgiving
Caught in a web of distortion
spun with contorted misfortune and tortured living 
And like iron in his breast his heart in his chest
is now hardened by advantages taken
Thrown off his feet deep into deceit
by the ones who were fake and mistaken
The walls were high but still he tried to climb them
blinded by hindsight's illusion
But the fight was abrupt because he quickly gave up
and was corrupted by anger's intrusion
So he erected a gate of misplaced hate
and a distaste for help uninvited
Fanning the fire of ire he grew weary and tired
of feeling unwanted and slighted
Now alone in his static world of trust unfurled
unraveled by mischievous fingers
It's been going on for too long and he's drawn to the song
being sung by the Harvester's singers
The night seems right to end this fight
and embrace the light of salvation
He steps off the edge but won't fall in tomorrow
as sorrow turns into elation 

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Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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