Natural Bliss

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Natural Bliss

She watched the sun set,
as she sat on the sand.
She looked their eyes met,
he took her by the hand.

They walked towards the ocean.
Stripping as they went.
She sniffed in his potion,
his strong muscular scent.

He swept her of her feet,
and up into his arms.
All she could feel was the heartbeat,
of his naked body charms.

They walked into the water.
Where first began the kiss.
Bodies melted to the ocean.
In a world of natural bliss.

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kamaldahal commented on Natural Bliss

10-27-2009

Dear xsnoopsx, from where you brought this kind of feelings and sweet lyrical writing style. I liked your poem too much that I can't express more what to say. You are really good in writing poem. Please keep on writing like this, I will keep on reading your poem always. Beautiful formation. Kamal

xsnoopsx

10/28/2009

thank you, thats a very sweet comment xxx

backspace commented on Natural Bliss

10-14-2009

hi i like this poem its cool that their is sweet poems out today dont stop it

xsnoopsx

10/14/2009

ye its one of my favs... thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it :)

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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