Hazy Rain

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  • Sadness

    Hazy Rain

     I can feel pain.
    I can feel shame.
    I can feel cold, and light hazy rain.

    You know that i love you.
    You know I'm in pain, as i stand here and wonder.
    In the light hazy rain.

    I know your not coming.
    You have stood me up.
    I'm feeling the shame as i stand here alone in this light hazy rain.

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    Nadia1986 commented on Hazy Rain

    10-14-2009

    I liked it and I could see you in the rain just waiting waiting for a love that never comes.
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    xsnoopsx

    10/14/2009

    nd sadly he nvr did.... :) thanks for your comment xxx

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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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