MOTHER,MOTHER,MOTHER

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    MOTHER,MOTHER,MOTHER
    Mother,Mother,Mother-I love you so,You stayed my my side an watched
    me grow,From adolescent to becoming a young man,You gave me wisdom and knowledge so i'd understand,Mother,Mother,Mother-Before
    you please take me,Without you in my life that day i wouldn't want to
    see,You gave me support and never left my side,You got even stronger
    when pops had to ride,You stood with four kids an you stood with pride,
    Mother,Mother,Mother-You raised all your kids an never left us bare,If there wasn't food what we had everybody had to share,You didn't do for one an not the other,Every night after we said our prayers you tucked us in our covers,So as i sit here thinking of you on this day,I'm remembering some of the thing you use to say,you'd say brothers love
    your sisters,Sisters love your brothers and love me because i'm your
    MOTHER. BY; JLS

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    sandee commented on MOTHER,MOTHER,MOTHER

    11-09-2009

    Great Poem or shall i say tribute ! your mother must be so proud. We as moms need to hear more things from our children like that in this day and time.Thanks Jim keep writing
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    Lolee commented on MOTHER,MOTHER,MOTHER

    08-22-2009

    Jim, some of us sure had a wonderful Mother...huh? I feel sorry for those who never got to experience such a miracle. This was a truly beautiful tribute to your mother...If she is gone and did not get to hear her grateful son's words...I, as a mother want to say thank you for her. I have four children and they are all grown up...I would love a poem like this. Bless you.
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    jim2009

    08/23/2009

    lolee i'm fortunate to still have thank GOD.but i did this because through my ups & downs, my ins & outs,she always had faith in me.i think only her in GOD knew i would make it through.this was one of the few ways i thanked her

    photochick commented on MOTHER,MOTHER,MOTHER

    08-20-2009

    you very sweet I am sure this painted a smile on your mothers face and tears in her eyes very sweet you show your emotion well here you show the reader just how dear your mother is to you and they can feel how important she is and your love you have for her and all that she has done well done great write your talent does shine here
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    jim2009

    08/22/2009

    well i try show express my feelings about everything & everyone.thanks..i got mo check me out

    Keiko commented on MOTHER,MOTHER,MOTHER

    08-18-2009

    Other great poem, I really hope she got to read it. keep sharing
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    jim2009

    08/19/2009

    hey thxs for the comment.

    Dreamer123 commented on MOTHER,MOTHER,MOTHER

    07-05-2009

    Awesome!!!! It's fantastic! In some parts it sounds like a rap or a song. I love it.
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    jim2009

    07/07/2009

    thxs i have so much more to share.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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