DON't BE MADD!!!

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    DON't BE MADD!!!

    If i don't have the time to slip,
    Do you, i can't afford to trip,
    I've never begged anyone for a
    relationship,
    This way there's no anger or bad
    attitudes,
    If you're happy being around other
    dudes.
    Me today, them tomorrow depending
    on your mood,
    Now you'll miss the well, when it gets
    dry,
    I see you as a friend,no need to try,
    That's all we can be plus, you know why,
    I'll rather stay single an i will not cry,
    I refuse to get caught up, in the coming
    & goings,
    The trusts not that thick,i don't be
    knowing,
    It's all good,we'll keep the options
    flowing,
    So, you stay on the other side of the
    fence,
    In the future you'll say,i havn't seen
    another like him since,
    That man name JAY!! damn where has
    he went,
    He made you laugh,all the time that was
    spent,
    But ,he refused to be the one with the
    heart that'll be dent,
    I believe you are away from home but,
    still i'm glad,
    I appreciated the honesty also, what
    we use to have,
    Don't read this an think i'm sad,
    Believe this i've never cried over what i
    never had,
    I've seen the light you've shown so,
    DON'T BE MADD!!
                                                BY J.l.S

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    sammia commented on DON't BE MADD!!!

    09-09-2009

    Wow. This had me wanting more to read after i finished each line. My favorite part of this is the last two lines. That just seems so real to me. Great write and keep writing and sharing.

    jim2009

    09/09/2009

    thanks i'm glad u liked it.

    Lolee commented on DON't BE MADD!!!

    09-01-2009

    Wow! Silly girl, she just didn't know what she had, or your were too much man for her. You had too much heart it seems. Believe me, there are many girls out there that will appreciate you. Great poem!

    jim2009

    09/01/2009

    thanks i'll be glad when one comes my way!!lol..

    jademelissa74 commented on DON't BE MADD!!!

    08-26-2009

    Jim, this poem is full of anguish at the loss of someone close to the author, yet realization and acceptance is well offered as the poem develops all the way through the end. You have managed to maintain a level of interest. Good job :))

    jim2009

    08/31/2009

    thanks sooo much!!

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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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