LONELY

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    LONELY

    That's how i feel when um by myself,When i really need someone there's no one to help,My life started alright an full of dreams,The
    average kid life starts full of joy,All that changed once i stopped being a boy,As i reached manhood with no big brother or father,When i got into trouble there was no one to bother,Dealing with situation lost and all alone,I didn't have anyone that would even pick up the phone,No one around to give me advice,Then i decided the survive by rolling the dice,Taking it to streets to get what i thought was mine,My whole life was full of crime,From that point on until i went to jail,things got heated i was living in hell, Sitting in there feeling like a bum,Looking back now knowing it was dumb,Now i see that i do have help,Asking my higher power to guide me to the very first step,So my life has been changed now i do see the light,I wake up everyday knowing i'm gonna do right,So to the friends i thought i had,Thanks for turning your backs i am not mad,i keep it real i'm no phony,now i've changed i'm no longer LONELY

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    Lolee commented on LONELY

    08-22-2009

    Hey Jim, That Higher Power is JESUS. Just like we love to hear someone call our name, so does JESUS. So, call Him...and use His Name! Did you know that there is power in that Name? He loves you and wants you to get to know Him well. Read His letters to you...His mail to you is the Bible. Nice writing my friend.

    Keiko commented on LONELY

    08-18-2009

    Jim, That is great! When I read the 1st couple lines it kinda sounds like one of mine, as far as being lonely and there not being anyone. Keep wriing:)

    jim2009

    08/19/2009

    again preciate it.i already have so much to share but my job is takin so much of my time.

    jim2009

    08/19/2009

    again preciate it.i already have so much to share but my job is takin so much of my time.

    hdmac commented on LONELY

    06-11-2009

    Good poem about your feelings. Keep on keepin' on bro. I'm glad when brothers pour out their hearts and just let it go.

    jim2009

    07/07/2009

    hey thanks so much for the comment

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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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