IS IT FOR THE BEST

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    IS IT FOR THE BEST

    That i move on an go my separate way,
    Even tho it's your face thats needed
    everyday,
    Should i ignore the bull and have nothing
    to say,
    With my bags packed like i'm going astray,
    Finding myself sitting here willing to pray,
    Now i'm maKing amends there's no room to
    play,
    So,i love with all my might,
    I give all that i have still things are not right,
    For your potenials makes me keep up the
    fight,
    Some sunny days have me chasing the light,
    we all make mistakes that maynot seem to
    bright,
    When you have a women,a friend or a girl,
    She's to be treated,as a jewel,a diamond,
    a pearl,
    So, do you tell her what's best is for you to
    leave her world?
    Or realize what you want is worth tryin it
    again,
    Forgive & forget some of the places we've
    been,
    Because,criticism will have us being as
    friends,
    If discombobulating feelings continue then
    its best to let it end,
    Relationship consist of a women and a man,
    Who work hard together to accomplish
    things at hand,
    They communicate daily to know where
    they stand,
    She's the queen while i be the king that
    protects the land,
    I get so tired this could put me to rest,
    Why because i love more instead of less,
    Should i be by myself because i do my
    best?
    If so,then,ITS FOR THE BEST!!!!

                                                            BY j.l.S

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    ansari commented on IS IT FOR THE BEST

    05-26-2010

    very thought provoking. a deep probe into the mind. i loved it . its 10 from me.

    jademelissa74 commented on IS IT FOR THE BEST

    08-31-2009

    A battlefield; where love was murdered, self-esteem was sacrificed and forgiveness was annihilated. You describe pain and frustration well. Acceptance at its best. You are a talented writer. Keep on allowing your mind to flow.

    jim2009

    09/01/2009

    not only are you absolutely wonderful at poetry!!you have a unique way of commenting..i feel very blessed to have someone such as yourself to notice my abilities.thank you

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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