Lovers Loss

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    Lovers Loss
    Shattering pieces of my Heart
    Hitting the floor.
    As you were slipping away.
    Shaking as the thousands of tears
    Drench the my pain and sorrow
    Filled eyes.

    Falling to the floor I “cry harder”
    Praying and Pleading
    “God Please”
    Please don’t take him away!

    A precious little voice sooths my heart
    I hear
    Twinkle Twinkle little star
    “It’s going to be okay Mommy”
    Daddy will be alright

    My heart just raced violently
    Screaming
    I can’t lose another Love
    Not Now
    Not Him
    I Love Him!

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    rollerderby commented on Lovers Loss

    02-02-2009

    The loss of love can be very painful and the loss of a loved one that is truly loved is even harder to deal with. but you've taken a step in the right direction with a little self therapy in the form of your poem. Well done dear! Doug
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