Love

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    Love
    Love

    ripping apart inside

    of me

    despair...

    eating away

    at my misery

    frustration

    confusion

    hatred

    what is love

    but a mere

    feeling

    a mere

    emotion

    a collision of

    happiness

    hate

    lust

    ripping apart

    inside of me

    eating away

    my very

    being

    set me free

    i reach out

    nothing there

    touch my hand

    touch my heart

    show me

    your there

    take over me

    i look inside

    nothing...

    feelings

    love

    happiness

    laughter,

    nothing but

    tears

    hate

    anger

    eating away...

    tearing at my

    very essence

    feeling...

    dead

    wishing

    hoping

    no more

    no less

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    Christina13 commented on Love

    01-10-2009

    Amazing! You nailed all the emotions tired in with love and all the aspects relating to it. I can’t wait to read more. Christina13
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    dahlusion commented on Love

    01-04-2009

    sounds like you need to go into a forest and SCREAM!! lots of passionate anger here.
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    Vincent commented on Love

    12-19-2008

    I tip my hat to the lady from Kansas, she has the floor. Nothing and I do mean nothing that I have read has been boring. Dime to a Dollar she can dance too. Smiles
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    litldeer commented on Love

    12-19-2008

    I really like this
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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