Set Me Free

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    Set Me Free
    Save me
    tear away these
    chains
    that bind me
    to myself
    set me free
    for i am
    a caged bird
    trapped in my own
    body
    absorbed
    by my own
    hatred
    my own
    self
    set me free
    let me
    live
    let me love
    let me
    breath
    nothing but
    dispair
    these eyes
    dead
    this heart
    empty
    sadness
    save me
    i reach out
    nothing
    nobody
    is anyone
    there
    i'm alone
    in my own body
    trapped
    let me go
    set me
    free

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    Christina13 commented on Set Me Free

    01-10-2009

    Wow you have a way with words. Christina13
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    dahlusion commented on Set Me Free

    01-06-2009

    your passion sets me on fire, crowding my lips with hunger…
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    Emmad commented on Set Me Free

    12-22-2008

    In your profile you’ve mentioned that your writing can help others, however specially in your this poem you need to be helped. This could help if you had implied a course of action. Hope my positive criticism helps.
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    darkhart commented on Set Me Free

    12-20-2008

    im new to this site,haven't read many yet, but i feel you. awsome.
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    Jemore commented on Set Me Free

    12-20-2008

    Really like this Poem, short and spicy. Plus it have me feeling I needed to be let free as well
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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