Ecstacy

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    Ecstacy

    Gazing into your seductive eyes
    my entire body becomes submissive
    to your every desire
    You begin to emerge yourself into
    deep ecstasy of passion
    that is to fulfill both
    forcing us to become one in the night
    fire burning through our souls
    as you inter my body
    piercing lust streams through my veins
    i can feel the pounding of your body against mine
    as my heart races to the melody of our two bodies
    sweat drips from your chest onto mine
    as it were a river of ecstasy
    our desires fulfilled
    as your sweet nector flows into me
    satisfying our ever fantasy

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    PRober commented on Ecstacy

    07-08-2009

    now that's hot, my attention it got and desire meter pegged on ALOT! lol! Great job, write on!

    dahlusion commented on Ecstacy

    01-04-2009

    very stimulating, steamy, sultry…"our desires fulfilled as your sweet nectar flows into me satisfying our ever fantasy" mmmmmmmm (check spelling)

    Vincent commented on Ecstacy

    12-18-2008

    Very well written poem. You captured mood, the moment beautifully. A sweet surrender of tender, and passionate love making. well done. smiles

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