Lost In A World Of Chaos

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    Lost In A World Of Chaos

    im walking through life wondering
    what is my purpose, what is my reason
    i know some, but not all
    im wondering, who am i
    i look around me
    i see everyone, but no ones sees me
    i scream, but am not heard
    they look, but dont see
    they touch, but dont feel
    they walk, but go no where
    and in this world of chaos i wonder
    does no one live anymore, is no one alive
    i take it not
    to look in their eyes and see the emptyness like bodies without souls
    may they still have a heart
    does it beat within their chest
    does it beat like mine
    does it pump the blood through their veins as it does mine
    i look, and see
    i touch, and feel
    i walk, not sure where i am going, but still i go
    lost in a world of chaos, arent we all

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    dahlusion commented on Lost In A World Of Chaos

    05-01-2009

    In this poem you appear to be speaking for "everyone", and if you do not know them, how do you know what the see, or feel, or where they are going, or if they live or not, and no, not everyone is lost in a world of chaos. This poem is based on assumption that everyone is lost, and that's not so. Being lost arises from negative thinking——it's a state of mind.

    nakedtruth43 commented on Lost In A World Of Chaos

    03-14-2009

    I could imagine myself passing through crowds of people as I read this. Great!

    Footprints2002 commented on Lost In A World Of Chaos

    03-14-2009

    Very Good

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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