Thoughts

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Thoughts

crickets chirping
bull frogs croaking
breeze is blowing
moon is full

a beautiful night it is

for the night is my friend...when im the most free
the wind blowing soft on your face i will be
listening to the night...still full of life
it holds no sadness, fear, or strife

i close my eyes and listen to the sounds of the night
releasing my mind, i soar through the air, what a wonderful flight
i feel so free its a wonderful feeling
the natural high i get, and the joy of succeeding

no worries or sorrows do i feel at this time
only the magic of life in its prime
i dread not the battle for wich i will fight
i know i will win, success is in sight

just thoughts of my dreams im sharing with you
i know it, i see it, i'll make them come true

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Footprints2002 commented on Thoughts

03-15-2009

Great Job Another I love you can write and if anyone says you cant then they need to take a closer look. I also love the night. while everyone is in bed i can see the night as it is

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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