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    Listen
    As you read, listen...
    Listen to the repitition,
    Also to my diction...
    Listen, no words I'm missin'.

    Listen, to blessins & wishins...
    Anguished from life and what's not right.
    Livin' with my life, I'm driftin.
    As my spirit tries to soar, liftin...

    Always firm for feelin futile...
    Lasting as much as I can
    Always under a trial...
    Lasting as an occupant with triffles in denial.

    Lessons pressin' in my brain
    About good and hostile...
    Lettin' myself gain, meanwhile
    All should listen & learn from another child

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    KING commented on Listen

    06-07-2010

    Nice stuff man,................................... keep up the good work and hustle!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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