The Day I Die

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    The Day I Die
    The Day I Die
    That'll be the day
    The day my life's pain's away
    The day nothing iz to stay
    But to say
    Fuck death & closed castkets
    So when I'm dead
    Cremate me into ashes
    So that i fly like time
    While flowin like rivers
    With a loss of connection like"miss cum hither"
    As i wither
    Like you're bound to
    Either now or later
    It's gonna come around to you
    So if you dont understand
    And cry with a sigh
    I always wonder why:
    The sky is so blue
    And the soil is true for what it put me through

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    Artie commented on The Day I Die

    06-15-2010

    Nice write- I like your usage of words. 10 from me
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    wickedjester commented on The Day I Die

    06-06-2010

    I really like this one I wish I could have had those words at my gpa's funeral it sounded like something he would say
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    JayJ420

    06/16/2010

    are you calling me old?

    Metaldoll commented on The Day I Die

    03-03-2009

    ur a young poet, but a great poet. keep on writing, very nice work. read/rate mine plz!!!!
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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