Survival

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    Survival

    I put a knife to my neck, and what do I feel?
    A soft but sharp touch
    Not much to the pain that's real
    It spills then rains and pours
    Spreading as I try to ignore
    I store my emotions knowing why
    I'm protective from oppresive others so deceptive,
    Repressive to cry
    In the misserable lives we live
    When we give up, we look for alternatives
    Taught to forgive but not to forget
    I repent because I have to let go
    In this world so molevolent
    I wont be so repentant
    I wont be so sad, happy, nor mad
    For all the things I have or had
    I'm glad I still got my life
    Livin' with triffles, trying to be bright though
    I know I won't give up
    Livin' to die though I'm in survival suicidal.

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    AmadeusEx commented on Survival

    06-16-2010

    youre like eminem...lol...whats your process? very unique voice, you sound like you know who you are which is what makes your poetry believable, another great job

    JayJ420

    06/16/2010

    I'm not white n most people say I rap just like bonethugs.....i guess its cuz i love to rap fst....my slow flows are sick wit it though....

    charmlessman2d commented on Survival

    06-06-2010

    dude. you've got brillliant rhyme schemes in this one. i dig the flow. keep writing brother

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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