Lifeless

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  • Dark Poetry

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    You need to live it to know it.

    Lifeless

    A daily routine of a empty corpse.

    She wakes up wondering why she still has a pulse or a heart or a brain, when no emotions inhabit them.

    She walks on empty hopes praying that she may fall to the ground and die.

    Yet no murcy kill is in order, she is to suffer.

    Tear ingraved in her eyes but no feeling to attach them to.

    Yet she understands what suffering is and she know she is.

    She tell the world it wins and with one swift motion she impails her self in a vital organ and dies instinatiously.

    A smile finnaly pained her face.

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    AlisRed commented on Lifeless

    09-28-2011

    Lol thank you :D I love darkness its my best element, i belive if ur only going to stand in the safe zone of the darkness or share observation about it then darkness isnt your thing i like to get in there :D and ...it sucks but its nice
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    MysticFalls commented on Lifeless

    09-28-2011

    I have a poem kind of like this is called A Zombie Conscience. I like the darkness of of this poem
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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