Fall

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This is a sensory poem I wrote it about what i wanted most at the moment. I wrote it using my most treasured memories

Fall

Fall is knocking on my door

I see pumpkinz bright and shiny

The air smells sweet and weightless

Sipping hot chocolate

I feel Warm by the fire

My mother holding me in her arms

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Teardrops commented on Fall

02-06-2011

She still holds you as my husband still kisses me on the the wind Marie

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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