Laela

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  • Death

    Laela

    Almost a year has passed,
    By the hand of another you were taken away.
    Yet in my heart you are still here with all of us,
    Smiling throughtout the day.
    Gleaming like the sun witha warmth and glow for a sunflower to follow.
    But then reality sets in,
    That you really are gone.
    My soul fills with sorrow.
    I can still see you,
    In the faces of your children,
    Strong and proud.
    You're in a better place,
    To keep an eye on all of us,
    Our guardian angel from beyond yet all around.
    We will miss your laughter, your style, and grace.
    But most of all we will iss your smiling face.

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    dovesofpeace commented on Laela

    06-03-2009

    Very touching poem, I loved it and it close to my heart because I lost my Father last summer and my GrandMother. Thank you for sharing that!

    rita commented on Laela

    01-12-2009

    GREAT POEM,I GUESS WE ALL HAVE BEEN THERE AT ONE POINT OR THE OTHER. UR POEM CAPTURES THAT MOOD AND I LOVE IT.

    HouseMouse commented on Laela

    12-03-2008

    Having been where you have been your words ring so true.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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