A True Story

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  • Anger

    A True Story
    You said you loved me,
    Then I needed an ice pack.

    You said you were sorry,
    Then you took that back.

    My heart is heavy,
    And my mind is weary.

    But if you put your hands on me again...
    The end for you will be dark, lonely, and dreary.

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    dovesofpeace commented on A True Story

    06-03-2009

    Another very good poem! I like how it showes your true emotions poems are such a great way to heal that inner hurt in us!
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    rita commented on A True Story

    01-12-2009

    ur poem needs some body, i guess u sud take out time to read other ppl's poems it will hlp u develop ur poem writing skills, dnt kill ur zeal , just work on it to improve.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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