Is It How It Is

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Is It How It Is

Too much is hidden
Too much is given

Be ashamed of your sins
Be proud of your wins

What has not happened;must happen
Feel free to come out;to go deep in

I see what  I can;but wonder
What I see;Is It How It Is.

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SilverGirl commented on Is It How It Is

11-14-2009

Very good poem.. short, concise.. with a huge message. Great job. Agreeing with Dumplin.. I would love to see you add a bit more to this as well. It is lovely how it is, though I think a little more would paint a bigger picture.. Hugs.. SG

dumplin commented on Is It How It Is

10-21-2009

This is nice. I like the concept. I wish it were longer. It leaves me wanting more.

aggieprof commented on Is It How It Is

10-19-2009

Well done. Very profound thoughts. Love the contrasts.

bforibus commented on Is It How It Is

10-03-2009

wow. this is philosphy at its pinnacle. to see the world from both sides of the coin. i love the line:Be ashamed of your sins Be proud of your wins. this within itself battles each other. great job

Sufie

10/03/2009

hey.. i wrote it after pasting the two coins together

knight4696 commented on Is It How It Is

10-03-2009

I like this one Sufie - you pose a very good question ? Sometimes things aren't always as they appear , but then again - sometimes they are.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Sufie’s Poems (7)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Holiness within 2
The Change 4
Free limits 6
God is busy 3
Two friends in me 4
Coupled Couplets 4
Is It How It Is 7