Coupled Couplets

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    Coupled Couplets
    There is something in the air,
    that makes me feel bare.

    There is a joyous condolence in my heart,
    all the pains are gathered in a fair.

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    bforibus commented on Coupled Couplets

    10-03-2009

    but to what or whom are you paying this to. i loved the brief shout of emotion. it allows the reader to draw their own conclusion. this was a great piece.
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    Sufie

    10/03/2009

    It was me speaking to myself, no one could have the ears to hear it, the way i did.

    knight4696 commented on Coupled Couplets

    10-03-2009

    Sufie - TThis one is my favorite of yours. It is direct and to the point and conveys quite a meaning in a few short sentences. Sometimes It seems a lot more can be said in a few words. then when a poem is filled with a bunch of jargon. Nice work!
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    Sufie

    10/03/2009

    Thanks for such kind words.

    roh commented on Coupled Couplets

    09-10-2009

    What can one say in these four sentences more than what yu said in this one? Nice couplet! Desi poems are still alive...im glad....! ThanQ Im loving it!
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    Sufie

    09/10/2009

    how do we talk?

    roh commented on Coupled Couplets

    09-10-2009

    Sufie...This shows the pureness, freshness and poetry of an Indian! ThanQ Im lovin it! Im happy to find an Indian frend atlast
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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