Free limits

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Free limits

No one is free,
 not even a wave
which leads a blissful life,
spending the whole to cast a shadow
of the eruption of life.

Not even a sky,
which covers this earth, but what all
it bears for being such a protection,
it weeps whenever, its strings
are stretched at its ends.

And of course not me,
who is bound to write, whatever
he makes out of the world,
stuck in between.

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dumplin commented on Free limits

11-14-2009

What a unique point of view! I like this piece very much.

bforibus commented on Free limits

11-03-2009

i know this feeling and emotion all to well. this was a very good read. i do wish it had a bit more adjectives to make it more profound, but still enjoyed it non the less

cliftondurant commented on Free limits

11-02-2009

this is interesting indeed no one is free enjoy the read

SuperChick76 commented on Free limits

11-02-2009

Very intiguing, I must admit. I like the last stanza, especially. Sometimes you seem to rhyme but then others you don't, so I don't know if you were trying or not. But, on a whole it was very decent poem. The flow was good and I liked you choice of words, and the message was very nice, the best part of the poem I might add. Good job.

rougepriest commented on Free limits

11-01-2009

its a good poem and the imagery is nice, one line doesnt work very well---------but what all it bears for being such a protection, ---------is left hanging open not answering its own question, other than that i liked it

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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