The Change

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    The Change
    Rob me of my senses,
    push me beyond,
    pull me into.

    Let everything be one,
    nothing full or empty,
    one which is all.

    But seeing myself pensive,
    i realized even i am not,
    what i was.

    Let it happen,
    the movement,
    the chan    ge.




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    klassik commented on The Change

    03-11-2010

    Very nice, this is a great write! .
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    summerrose35 commented on The Change

    01-26-2010

    beautiful write.creative! I loved this! and will read more!SR
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    redbloodink commented on The Change

    01-26-2010

    I like change it is for the best and is how we grow into what we become.... nice write............ red
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    SilverGirl commented on The Change

    12-04-2009

    Ah but to partake is the miracle of metamorphosis..you give in to the harsh.. or mellow changes as you travel this journey of life. Short.. sweet.. concise.. This is a very nicely written poem. Nice metaphores.. Great message.. Hugs SG
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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