In the Gentle Breeze

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    In the Gentle Breeze

    feel you in the gentle breeze,

    That flows about each day.

    I feel you in the moonlight,

    Remember the night you walked away.


    I knew it would be the last time,

    I would watch you leave,

    I lingered at the window,

    That's when I began to grieve.


    I can hear your voice,

    So deep and so profound,

    It calls to me in silence,

    But I still perceive the sound.


    I sense you in the darkness,

    Before I fall asleep,

    And when I dream I see you,

    I wake myself and weep.

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    Neisha commented on In the Gentle Breeze

    05-08-2009

    this is very good

    carollynn1964 commented on In the Gentle Breeze

    03-04-2009

    Very Creative and Deep! Love It!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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