I Look Into Your Eyes

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    I Look Into Your Eyes
    I look into your eyes,

    So big and brown.

    I see the little boy,

    Hiding behind a frown.

    What can I do,

    To make you smile,

    What can I do,

    To keep you awhile.

    Is there an answer to such mystery?

    Why do we have to say goodbye to our history?

    I thought we'd have forever and a day,

    I hate this thing thats taking you away.

    Once you ran free and wild,

    Now I miss that little child.

    The one I looked up to,

    The one I always will.

    You taught me never to give up,

    Thats something you'd always instill.

    If only there was something I could do.

    If only this horrible fate were untrue.

    I look into your eyes,

    So big and brown,

    You're the best older brother,

    I could have ever found.

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    SavVySam commented on I Look Into Your Eyes

    07-18-2009

    That was just beautifully written, good job! Your brother must be very proud of you as well! I enjoyed reading this very much-Thanks
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    UnworthyFather commented on I Look Into Your Eyes

    06-14-2009

    Beautifully written!! Exquisite baring of the soul. I tell you, if I were your older brother, and this poem didn't get me to stay... a smile and a wink might have. Thanks for sharing. 10
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    carollynn1964 commented on I Look Into Your Eyes

    03-04-2009

    Made me Tear up...
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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