Acrimony

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    Acrimony

    Acrimony infiltrates my system,

    As if no other affection abides.

    It impregnates whats left of me.

    It permeates my bones,

    The very actuality of my being.

    It is as malignant as a horrific disease,

    That consumes whats left of my pure self.

    Causing affliction of heartache on innocent witnesses.

    It must be contained for the spirit will surely cease to

    remain if left to accumulate.

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    Smurf1 commented on Acrimony

    07-22-2009

    You are very good writter, have you written any novells lately? If not I think you work should, be posted on Forward press.com, they have writting contaest every so often I think you have good chance on being published.

    laydbak1 commented on Acrimony

    06-12-2009

    A good personification of the word defining it in terms of an anguishing self-spirit... I sense a bitter dishevel of the voice's consciousness though, it appears to slip in and out of reality, eg - as if no other affection resides - the voice really doesn't believe this spiritual drain is, or will be, the only player in this scene of the soul... but, i do sense an inner resolve at the ending, ie, a conclusion... change is in order, else things could get worse; much worse.... a very good write...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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