I WANT TO LIVE

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    I WANT TO LIVE

    Don't believe what the doctor said
    Or the articles that I read
    Won't live stuck in my bed
    There is still to much ahead

    Better get to hiding the knife
    I won't give up on life
    Just have to handle the strife
    I plan on being someone's wife

    I'm trying real hard to understand
    They said life would be grand
    It's getting to hard to stand
    No more playing in the sand

    Waiting for the doctor to call
    Pacing up and down the hall
    What he said I can't recall
    Something about this being it all

    With friends my time I'll spend
    Especially you my very best friend
    Soon it will be the end
    My funeral they will all attend

    Don't cry because I am gone
    Remember that life does go on
    Please don't from life be withdrawn
    Wake up and enjoy the dawn

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    abbyownzemos commented on I WANT TO LIVE

    05-02-2009

    i completely understand this poem!! im 16 and dying!! great poem!!T.T

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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