I haven't said "goodbye"

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  • cheezchic
  • Lead with your soul and be proud for some have not even a heart

I haven't said "goodbye"

No I haven't said that painful word, I just can't say "goodbye"
I still hold onto your pictures with tears running from my eyes...

I loved you so very much and gave you all that was me
never thinking of the possable pain, foolishly I gave you every piece...

Tears once flowed like a waterfall from the highest mountain top
slowly they have become running like a stream, soon they will stop...

Until that day I will never be able to say "goodbye"
For when I do I know my love for you will have died...

God grant me the strength to say "goodbye"

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Rhymer commented on I haven't said "goodbye"

09-30-2010

Your emotions are felt by the reader in this vivd piece. Excellent read 10 from me.

ApaqRasgirl commented on I haven't said "goodbye"

09-30-2010

wonderful and truly heartfelt write, one of the hardest things in life to say goodbye to one you love, but there is strength in your spirit and soul to survive, and soon the tears will find joy again in life. trust in the light and let it into you heart and soul.........your passion in your words are felt so deeply by the reader. wonderful job dear.........thanks love asha

angelchaser commented on I haven't said "goodbye"

09-29-2010

I can relate to this as well. I wrote a poem recently about a woman I knew who basically took me for a ride and dumped me when I was no longer needed.

cheezchic

09/29/2010

If he and I had fought or had differances it wouldn't be so difficult...but he just doesn't want to be in a relationship and risk being hurt if it doesn't work out...I don't see how one can fall in love and run for fear...wow I hold back tears as I type this...

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

cheezchic’s Poems (81)

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Good bye is so hard to do 0
Freed 0
still remembering him 0
Patience for love 0
I made a wish for you 0
Fallen Fools 0
Remember "Us" Every Season 0
This be the one 0
I'm waiting 0
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Stand Strong 0
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Lets Open Our Wings 2
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Goodbye, the End 1
Faded 2
Voices in my Head 3
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Soul Mate 0
My baby, My girl 1
A New Beginning 0
Set Up Fail 2
earth is not our kiln 1
Can't drink you away 2
Don't Make Me Be The One 4
Fix Me 4
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I Never Told You 1
Kids Leave Scars 1
For You I Would 1
Where Are You 2
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His Love Boat 2
For A Gifted Man 2
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Unseen Passion 1
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I must let go 0
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Butter Knife Tongue 1
Gimme 1
Never Wake Me Up Baby!!! 0
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If I could Revenge on The Blind Man 1
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Thank You Lord 1
Fantasy World 1
Time Can Erase 0
When Breathing Hurts 0
The beauty of Love 0
Earths Beauty 1
Earth 0
We Are Silent 0
Oh you make me angry inside 0
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3 times goes my heart 1
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Scars bound my Heart 2
The Begging Heart 0
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