3 times goes my heart

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  • cheezchic
  • Lead with your soul and be proud for some have not even a heart

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Such words from a broken heart....Once inspired by love and now sadness...

3 times goes my heart

I loved you once, I loved you twice
I loved you three times
Then you told me  "goodbye"...

Thoughts race my mind
Do you ever think of me
You know are hearts forever bind...

I saw forever in your eyes
Do you remember looking into mine
For the eyes don't lie...

Once you saw fate in us
You couldn't wait to be together
Now you're closed up...

They say "Time Heals"
No this is not true
I will NEVER heal from loving you...

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ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on 3 times goes my heart

09-18-2010

I love the wording and emotion in this poem. You really conveyed the pain of a broken heart.Well done!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

cheezchic’s Poems (81)

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Good bye is so hard to do 0
Freed 0
still remembering him 0
Patience for love 0
I made a wish for you 0
Fallen Fools 0
Remember "Us" Every Season 0
This be the one 0
I'm waiting 0
I still believe in "FATE" 1
Simply "Together" 0
Stand Strong 0
Broken Heart 0
The Heart and Soul 2
My love song 2
Until I see you again 2
A Womans Flora 3
Lets Open Our Wings 2
Knowing Someone Special 1
This is my Faith 0
Goodbye, the End 1
Faded 2
Voices in my Head 3
Could this be the one 0
Soul Mate 0
My baby, My girl 1
A New Beginning 0
Set Up Fail 2
earth is not our kiln 1
Can't drink you away 2
Don't Make Me Be The One 4
Fix Me 4
I haven't said "goodbye" 3
I Never Told You 1
Kids Leave Scars 1
For You I Would 1
Where Are You 2
Soul Poetry 1
His Love Boat 2
For A Gifted Man 2
Love Letter 1
I Want To Be 1
Unseen Passion 1
Time will Heal 0
I must let go 0
Sinfully Good 2
New Love In The Horizon 1
Larry 0
Butter Knife Tongue 1
Gimme 1
Never Wake Me Up Baby!!! 0
Hopes To Love Again 1
If I could Revenge on The Blind Man 1
I see in colors of a Rainbow now 1
Thank You Lord 1
Fantasy World 1
Time Can Erase 0
When Breathing Hurts 0
The beauty of Love 0
Earths Beauty 1
Earth 0
We Are Silent 0
Oh you make me angry inside 0
He lives in me 1
3 times goes my heart 1
No matter how I try 0
Scars bound my Heart 2
The Begging Heart 0
Eyes say so much...lol 1
Eternily Yours 0
Remembering "The Eyes As A Child" 0
Online Poets Society 1
Love in the making? 2
One Family Two Hearts 0
Finding Love 2
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A Piece Of Yourself 1
With Wings We Should Soar 1
I Know He's Out There 1
The Blind Man Who Will Never See Me 1