I Give Up

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September 14th, 2013

I Give Up

I guess we're all chasing someone
Who is chasing someone
Who is chasing someone
Who is chasing someone . . .
But I'm all out of breath,
My legs are shot.
I forfeit this endless race
Going nowhere
Going nowhere . . .

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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