Hope

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    • Prophecy
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    Hope

    Thrash me deep into the sea of confusement
    with no boat, sharks out to get me so upward I thrust
    my pain is my muse and only amusement
    left deep in the valley with no one to trust

    Can I be saved or is this my fate
    I kick and push up and try to get out, but
    my hearts to heavy filled with vengeance and doubt
    and I have no faith and my minds consumed with doubt

    but until I drown I won't give in
    deep out in the ocean and running out of hope
    and I still bow my head for forgiveness to sin
    I look out and spot a small rope

    Its shot and seems to be useless
    but anything else is out of my reach
    I guess my only choice is to use this
    myself I believe and to God I beseech

    so thrash me deep into the sea of confusement
    with no boat, sharks out to get me still upward I trust
    my pain is my muse and my only amusement
    but I got god, and I'm alone so who else can I trust

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    1990lh commented on Hope

    07-22-2009

    a very deep and powerful poem i really like. keep shakin ya haters off

    prophesy commented on Hope

    02-12-2009

    continue to write yourself into exsisting, you are the princess of prophecy.(continued blessings/the prophet

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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